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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:42 pm 
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And she would like to know what native English speakers think. I would appreciate some feedback but do remember she's young. English lessons start in seventh grade ans she's still in six.

I look out of the window
Looking at the rain
I don't see much
But i know that there is more

The world is full of wonders
But they are far away
I would like to see them
tomorrow or today

I can sing
But that's everything
The world is full of wonders
I wanna see
I can walk
and i can talk
But walk to these wonders
I can't

I say to myself
I'm gonna do it
I go to the airport
and take the first flight

But there on the airport
The airplane start
But i do nothing
I step not in

And all i do is sing
and that is everything
The world is full of wonders
I wanna see
i can walk
and i can talk
But walk to these wonders
i can't


Then i come home
My parents are worried
but they are very happy
That i'm home again

That evening on my bed
I think about the world
and decide that the world
will have to wait

And i can sing
but that's not everything
The world is full of wonders
I wanna see
i can walk
and i can talk
and walk to these wonders
i can

Some day i will

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:12 pm 
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better than you Dirk!!! :lol: :P :D


edit: my youngest daughter just turned 12 on Halloween...watch out, the storm is brewing!

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:08 pm 
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That is so cool. Absolutely love it.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:24 am 
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I'm with Bok.

This is a good expression of the right attitude for a kid to have - there's a great big world out there & I want to see it ALL.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:36 pm 
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Thanks guys.

I think its priceless that she says 'The world will have to wait'. She realizes that she's not ready yet but still sees the world with here in the center and not the other way arround. :D

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